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TITLE: Your Words
By Amber Riebe
10/14/07
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Song lyrics. As usual I'd like to know if the flow is okay. How do you view this piece? Do you think it would make a good song? Do you think this piece is better suited for a poem?
Were You thinking just of me
when You wrote this Book that I read?
Did You carefully choose the words
You knew would reach so deep inside of me?
Iím beyond amazed by how well
each sentence fits into my life!
Now I know my heart beats for You,
And only for You my soul does strive.

I want Your words
imprinted upon my heart and mind.
If I get lost,
for You Iíll seek,
And You I know I will find.
I want to remember
every word You did say.
I'll hide and protect Your word
deep within,
where no one can ever take it away.

Lord, Youíre all Iíll ever need.
Youíre more precious to me
than the air I breathe.
With every word I read,
I feel myself growing closer to You.
Youíre filling me
and making my life
holy and true.
Let me fade into Your Presence,
where thereís only You and I.
Youíre the only One I want;
to You I give my life.

I want Your words
imprinted upon my heart and mind.
If I get lost,
for You Iíll seek,
And You I know I will find.
I want to remember
every word You did say.
I'll hide and protect Your word
deep within,
where no one can ever take it away.
.

For You my life I choose to live.
All that I have,
to You ,
I choose to give.
Speak to me Your very will;
if You say, ďMove,Ē Iíll go.
And if You say, ďStay,Ē I will be still.
I long to please You
in any way I can,
for without You,
Iím nothing,
You make me who I am.

I want Your words
imprinted upon my heart and mind.
If I get lost,
for You Iíll seek,
And You I know I will find.
I want to remember
every word You did say.
I'll hide and protect Your word
deep within,
where no one can ever take it away.

Lord, were You thinking just of me
when You wrote this Book that I read?
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