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TITLE: I Found My Perfect Song
By Amber Riebe
10/03/07
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This is a fun praise and thank you song. Does it sound like something that would be fun to listen to?
Well, I used to dance to a different beat,
With the ways of the world so cold beneath my feet.
I thought I knew the rhythm I wanted to follow.
I thought along with the song came the pain and the sorrow.
For so long I sang that song
but then one day something just didnít jive,
something felt wrong.

I had gotten tired of always singing the blues
And I was ready to try something new.
So I lifted my hands towards heaven and when I did,
I found the perfect song in You.

Now I have the perfect rhythm within my soul.
I have the Rock of Ages in my heart and Iím ready to roll!
Never again will I sing those blues,
For Iíve handed over the song writing of my life to You.

Now my lifeís rhythm follows the beat of Your heart.
This beautiful melody Youíve brought to my life is a flawless work of art.
Never again will I sing such a sad song.
Now I know You were who I was looking for all along.
Your beat makes my hands start clapping!
I canít seem to keep my toes from tapping!
Jesus, Youíve set my feet a-dancing!

Now I have the perfect rhythm within my soul.
I have the Rock of Ages in my heart and Iím ready to roll!
Never aging will I sing those blues,
For Iíve handed over the song writing of my life to You.

I love this new song Youíve given me.
Now I will sing forever and never again be off key.
I owe everything good in my life to You.
My heart You will always keep perfectly tuned.
Jesus, You are my perfect song
For in You there is no wrong.

I had gotten tired of always singing the blues
And I was in need of something new.
So I lifted my hands towards heaven,
And Iím so glad I did, because I found my perfect song in You.

Now I have the perfect rhythm within my soul.
I have the Rock of Ages in my heart and Iím ready to roll!
Never again will I sing those blues
for Iíve handed over the song writing of my life to You.

I no longer struggle to find the perfect tune,
For Iíve handed over the song writing of my life to You!
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