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TITLE: God's Grace Goes Deeper
By Amber Riebe
09/28/07
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How's the "flow" of this poem? Does everything seem to fit together like it should? Is the ending okay or would it sound better if the same theme line was repeated again?
Running down a long dark street,
No oneís around, you listen to the sound of your own heartbeat.
You wonder if thereís something more to life.
You feel the cold in the air sting your skin and
You wonder if youíll ever really feel alive again.
Looking up into the sky, you know you want to let Him in
But you wonder if Heíll still love you
if He knows of all the places youíve been.

Donít worry now.
Just let yourself give in and Heíll forgive everything.
Godís grace goes deeper than your sin.
So donít hesitate, just let Him in.

Alone in the middle of the street,
With your arms raised up, you fall to your knees.
The rain falls upon your raised face as you cry out to Jesus,
You know you need His grace.
You canít go without Him another day
So you humbly ask Him to show you the right way.
Your heart aches to let Him in
But in the back of your mind you wonder
if Heíll still love you once He knows of all the places youíve been.

His grace is amazing, taste and youíll see.
Heíll forgive your sins and bury them at the bottom of the sea.
Heíll never bring them out again;
From every one of your sins, Jesus will set you free.
I know so well because where you are
Is right where I used to be;
But when I asked, Jesus came into my heart and He set me free!
Heíll never look back at the places youíve been soÖ

Donít worry now.
Just let yourself give in and Heíll forgive everything.
Godís grace goes deeper than your sin.
So donít hesitate, just let Him in.

With His love Heíll reach in and take out the old.
Heíll wash your mind in His truth and cleanse your soul.
Heís already forgotten about all those places youíve been.
So donít worry now, just let yourself give in.
Invite Him in and see for yourself how much deeper
Godís grace goes than your sin.
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