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TITLE: Torn in Two
By
08/12/07
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The lie that is fed that the world is beyond hope and redemption. But that hope is there in Jesus, who is always the same yesterday, today and forever.
In this sin marred world,
The curtain is drawn against heaven,
God is just a fragment of glass,
Shredded into grains of sand,
Flowing through our fingers,
Into emptiness - gravity.

Man's word has pronounced,
The death sentence on us all,
Hope concrete room; hell,
Alice in wonderland,
Fantasy; through the mirror of despair.

Who dares to corrupt this world?
To tear down, to chain down?
Unto the nether world of demons,
The lie that there is no hope,
No life after this,
What is the point?

Seek and you will find,
Knock and the door will open,
What does your heart see?
Would you recognise goodness,
Pure essential!

His name was, is and is to come,
Saviour, Son of Man, Son of David,
King of Kings, Lord of Lords,
Word that became flesh,
Jesus.

Where are your tears?
He will wipe them away,
Where is your joy?
He will bring abundance,
Living streams of love.

The curtain has now torn,
In two!
The way is open,
The way is narrow,
The way is Jesus.

Come,
Sin marred world,
Come.
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