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TITLE: Words for My Dad
By Teri Van Pelt
07/17/07
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An experience I had, trying to convey my love to my dad.
Sitting there in my dad’s ole’ pick up truck.

Feeling somewhat paralyzed, I felt stuck.

I possessed feelings for my dad I needed to convey.

Contemplating just what and how to say

I counted to three underneath my breath,

Felt like I was meeting death.

All at once, I let the words out.

But his reply was with a cursing shout.

“Why must you talk that way?”

“Love is something I don’t need to say.”

“I say I love you by the fact that you are fed.”

“Don’t you have a roof over your head?”

He sat there continuing to tear me a part.

I guess I should have kept the words “I love you” inside my heart.”
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