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TITLE: When A Brave Man Stands
By David (The Goliath Assassin)
05/09/07
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This here is the title track to my 2007 album, When A Brave Man Stands. After laying down "The Beaten Man," "Hope And Scars," and "The Art Of Encouragement," I figured this would be a good one to end the 2007 album sampling with. Hopefully soon I'll have a minute to sit down and transfer a new batch of songs to type from my trusty notebook. Peace!
I won’t stop until the world knows my legacy!
I won’t stop ‘till I have served the Lord!
I won’t stop until my Savior is proud of my
Efforts to bring ears to hear his word!

I won’t stop until this veil of complacence
Is lifted from children who remind me of me…
Way back when, when I knew there was a problem
But did not have the proper vision to see!

I’ll keep fighting until I make a difference!
I’ll keep fighting for lost sheep like me!
I’ll keep fighting until all the evidence
Of my faith in Jesus is plain to see!

I will keep fighting as long as there is
Just one fatherless youth who listens to my call!
I will keep fighting and pointing to Jesus!
I’ll hold the front line and dispatch them all!

I’m at WAR with this façade!
This life of Sin we’re livin’!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

I’ve put all my faith in GOD!
This is my decision!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

I won’t stop! I will keep fighting until
The masses of people have heard Him speak…
In feeble fragments through my lips of flesh
That do not know the proper words with which to repeat!

What is it that makes me true to His purpose?
What is it that lets my heart believe?
What lives in my soul that tells me my maker?
How can I trust in something I can’t see?

What is there to gain by blocking Him out?
What freedom could I ever hope to obtain?
Everything I’ve ever done that he frowns upon
Has tainted my soul and made me insane!

God doesn’t hate Sin just because it’s unholy!
He’s not arbitrarily enforcing His rule!
God hates sinful acts that make us vulnerable
To the Prince of Darkness and all that is cruel!

I won’t let him take me down!
I don’t answer the call of sin!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

I have followed him before!
And into ruin I was driven!
But When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

We have been ignorant, you and I… No one man holds this blame…
But we have handed our world over to darkness just the same.
I am just a man… I cannot save your soul.
There’s nothing I can do to mend the sin and make you whole…

But I’ll stand up for you… My Brother, I will take the lead…
I’ll hold the line all by myself until you trust in me.
I cannot kill them all… They’re just too much for me…
Feel free to watch awhile, but soon I’m sure I’ll need relief.

Where are my reinforcements? Who’ll help me hold the line?
Who’ll trust the Lord we stand for… make use of stiffened spines?
Don’t even deify me… Don’t think I’m all God needs.
Don’t think I’ll win this alone… Look away and you’ll bleed.

This son of David cannot help but try to take charge in life…
But no stunt I’ll ever pull is intended to steal God’s light…
I’ve only tried to show you…What you had all along…
Before the Devil bent you… OUR SAVOIR MADE YOU STRONG!

Glory to God!
The Lord Christ is risen!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

He gave us all
The means to stand tall with him!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

Ally to God!
I’m holding the line with Him!
And When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!

Ally with God!
Make your decision!
‘Cause When A Brave Man Stands
The SPINES AROUND HIM STIFFEN!
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