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TITLE: My Favorite Sins
By Al Boyce
02/14/07
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This is a fun takeoff on "My Favorite Things." There wasn't a song or parody category, so I threw it in poetry.
My Favorite Sins
(To the tune of "My Favorite Things")

Jealousy, hatred and witchcraft and stealing
Lying and cheating and rash double-dealing
Drunkenness, orgies (they help me stay thin)
These are a few of my favorite sins.

Idolatry, murder and working the Sabbath
Envying, coveting all others haveth
Adultery, malice, dishonoring kin
These are a few of my favorites sins.

When the moon's full, when my blood's hot
When I'm feeling high
I like to engage in my favorite sins
But later I want to cry.

Impurity, strife and dissension I'm sowing
Wrath and dishonor in my life are growing
Torture and heartlessness through thick and thin
These are a few of my favorite sins.

Gossip, tale-telling and blind fornication
I feel I have sinned against friend, foe and nation
Breathless, exhausted, my head starts to spin
Where can I turn with this mountain of SIN??

When the moon's full, when my blood's hot
When I'm feeling high
I like to engage in my favorite sins
But later I want to cry.

Jesus is waiting, His arms ever-open
He will forgive me, at least so I'm hopin'
Never a question of where I have been
He will redeem me from all of my sins.

When I falter, when I'm selfish
When I'm feeling lost
I start to repent of my favorite sins
And then I know who's the Boss.
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