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TITLE: Within me
By Bella Louise
02/09/07
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My worst bully lies within me
The terrible voice that is within me
It says they are right to desert me
Says I deserve the names they give me
It enjoys it when my closest hurt me
It revels in the silence that surrounds me

My worst bully lies within me
The terrible voice that is within me
It tells me that they all despise me
That their lives would be better had they never known me
Reminds me Im worthless with no good in me
It revels in the silence that surrounds me

My worst bully still lies within me
The terrible voice that is within me
Years have passed, and Im free to be me
But it repeats the words once spoken to me
I cant let people see the true me
Because of the terrible voice that is within me.

My worst bully still lies within me
The terrible voice that lies within me
I counter it by saying God has called me
He thought I was worth it and died for me
In His image He created me
What a beautiful Voice lies within me.
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