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There was recently a challenge at my school to write a poem or piece of prose about bullies. I didn't submit one, but this leaped on me today, bit me in the back of the neck, and wouldn't rest until I wrote it down. Here it is: the bullies' story.
People don’t see inside a bully
They don’t know or even care
That when he gets home past sundown
Only violence greets him there
He’s got self-harm marks on his legs
He’s beaten daily, too
Remember how he’s hurting
Next time he bullies you
People don’t see inside a bully
They don’t know or even care
That when she drags herself back home
Only mockery is there
She listens to her parents’ lies
She thinks the words are true
Remember she feels worthless
Next time she bullies you
They’re so quick to point the finger
And blame films or magazines
They never see rejection
With which they treat their teens
Next time you see a bully
It’s hard, but try to care
That upon returning home
Only cruelty is there
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