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A silent tear falls down my face,
captured by my saviours hand,
once again found in that place,
alone I cannot stand.
He caught my tear, stood by my side,
and whispered in my ear,
you are never alone my child,
for I am always near.
You are the faithful one,
you are always there,
your endless love shown through your son,
that day you displayed how much you care.
My father this day I run from you,
for I know not how to come,
to come once more to what is true,
with a thankful heart for all you’ve done.
This journey on which you are taking me,
I do not understand,
far in the distance where I cannot see,
throughout the unknown lands.
And yet I know, where can I go,
where you would never find,
for about me all things you know,
Creator, Love, faithful and kind.
A tear again falls down my face,
for I no longer know,
how can I once more run this race,
and so I come to you, show me the way to go.
My Father once more I come to you,
for alone, reality I can face no more,
in you alone do I find what is true,
in your arms I can face whatever is just beyond that door.
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