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TITLE: your legacy
By valerie chambers
11/11/06
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“YOUR LEGACY”

Eyes meet, hearts pound, hands reach, common ground
God Watches

Pastor speaks, vows spoken, rings exchanged, loves token
God Listens

Home built, debts paid, love grows, foundation laid
God Helps

Child born, baby girl, life’s gem, precious pearl
God Smiles

Time passes, love grows, another girl, ribbons bows
God Rejoices

Hard work, toil pain, sweet reward, personal gain
God Encourages

Every day , living life, in peace, in strife
God Guides

Family expands, great joy, all celebrate, baby boy
God Chuckles

Growing up, children play, values develop, parents pray
God Answers

Another child, twisted curl, welcome here, baby girl
God Delights

Parents teach, personalities grow, happy children’s, faces glow
God sings

Solid rock, safe place, faithful Mom, love’s embrace
God Nurtures

Father, model, mentor, guide, in your love we all abide
God Sees

Sixty years, come and gone, children raised, job well done
God Notices

Mom and Dad , look around and see
We are your living legacy
God Applauds

©Valerie Joyce Chambers
October 22, 2004
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