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TITLE: The Time is Now
By DeWayne Bricker
10/18/06
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A poem about our religion and how God desires more from us.
We love you Jesus
The churches cry
For You we live
For You weíd die

From North to South
From East to West
We offer our praise
And join the rest

I hear the masses
They voice their cry
Their lips are moving
They close one eye

On day number seven
All lift their hands
They meet in temples
Across the lands

I do not hear you
Thunders loud a voice
Your heart is far from me
It is your choice

Your hearts are hard
Your jaws are set
Your hands are raised
Your eyes are wet

Your prayers beat up
Against an iron sky
No comfort comes
You wonder why

My arms are open
The opening wide
You stay without
Bound by pride

Your temples crumble
Around raised hands
Death sweeps over
Your holy lands


Religion itself
Is your snare
Ears are closed
Hearts donít care

But, if youíll listen
My voice will heed
Healing will come
Iíll fill your need

From day one
Together we walked
Our hearts were one
In gardens we talked

I long to heal you
And restore your land
To lift you up
With My own hand

Devour My words
Tear down your walls
And walk with Me
In golden halls

Shout my name
On knees do bow
Itís my last call
The time is now
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