Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
THE CRITIQUE CIRCLE

BACK TO
CRITIQUE CIRCLE

INSTRUCTIONS
COMPLETE
INSTRUCTIONS HERE

CRITIQUE GUIDELINES

CRITIQUE TIPS

HELP TOUR

It's easy to critique the works of others and get your work critiqued. Just follow the steps below:

1) Post your first piece.

2) You must then critique the work of another member to post another piece yourself.

3) For each critique you give, you earn 1 credit that can be used to post another one of your writings.

4) You can build up credits to be used at another time by giving critiques to others.
Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST





TITLE: The Birth of Christ from book of Matthew
By DeWayne Bricker
09/09/06
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND

A poem from first two chapters of Matthew, The Birh of Christ. I will write one from the other gospels also about the birth of Christ because each is unique and from a different perspective.
The birth of Christ was on this wise
An angel appeared from the skies

He said to Mary the virgin child
A son is coming meek and mild

Joseph don’t worry to take your wife
Go ahead and marry, it is for life

Joseph for you and yours to boast
The child is from the Holy Ghost

Jesus the Christ will be His name
All the earth will know His fame

God is with us, Emmanuel
All Gods children saved from hell

Bethlehem of David they were bound
Where the child called Jesus would be found

Herod the king, a jealous beast
Questions the wise men from the East

Find this child where ere He be
Then return and speak to me

The wise men followed where the star had told
For the child, they longed to hold

The star above came to rest
Evading Herod, they past the test

Within the house on knees did fall
And worshiped Him, Lord of all

Praise and worship their hearts astir
Gifts of gold, frankincense and myrrh

In a dream an angel said
Flee to Egypt until they’re dead

With wife and child he did run
Out of Egypt I called my Son

With wroth and anger Herod said
Less than two make them dead

A cry in Rama, lamentation heard
Long ago by the prophet’s word

In Nazareth He was seen
By the prophet’s word, a Nazarene
The opinions expressed by authors may not necessarily reflect the opinion of FaithWriters.com.
YOUR CREDITS

LOGIN HERE




REMINDER:

REMEMBER, this is a Critique Circle. Please try to give a critique to receive a critique. If you do not want to give any critiques, you can use the REGULAR ARTICLE SUBMISSION area. If you are unsure about how to critique, please use the CRITIQUE GUIDELINES and CRITIQUE TIPS.

VIEWING CRITIQUES:

To view your critiques that you receive on any writing, login to your account and click "CRITIQUE CIRCLE MANAGEMENT" to view all of your critiques and edit each piece. Then, click "VIEW CRITIQUES" next to the article title to view critiques on that piece. Comments on all of your writings when using the Critique Circle will not be displayed publicly as regular and writing challenge articles. They can only be viewed by accessing them from your account.