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TITLE: YOU
By Samuel Connelly
09/03/06
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Poem for my wife
Everything inside of me
Loves everything in you,
No one could ever take your place,
Or make me feel the way you do.

Iím always thinking of you
Your face never leaves my mind.
I lay awake some times in bed
To adore your beauty that is all mine.

The words you say to me,
Makes my heart and soul feel free,
I know I was made for you
Our love is just so right.

I am fully abandoned to you,
And want to be romantic for you
Itís faithful addiction, thatís true.
Your beauty is heaven defined.

And I am so in love with you,
It hurts when youíre away
And I would die a thousand deaths
Just to feel your touch on me.

My world is so alive with you,
My wife, my everything.
Yes, I am so in love with you,
Your love is life to me.


And all that I can do
Is stay right here
And be in love with you.
And all that I can say,
Is that youíre the girl
That saved my day
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