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TITLE: I Am A Sandwich
By Kim Sandstrom
08/16/06
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Following the loss of my only daughter, I adopted her only daughter who was 8 days old. Some thoughts on being in the "middle" in life.
Godspeed, Kim
I am a Sandwich!
I didn't mean to be one,
but here I am anyway
mayonaised to
my baby
and my mom.

I am

not

bologna
in the middle

nor

wimpy lettuce
flip flopping around the edges.


I am

not

chicken

(though my breast beats

love for both these ladies!)

I am a Sandwich,

though it is the baby who is a little crumb

sometimes

and

my mom

who is a little on the crusty side...

(very thankful she's not "toasted"!)

I definitely am a Sandwich

and I think

I should accept
that I am
what nourishes
their
lives.
With a enough mustard
I might make it through.
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