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TITLE: The 23rd Psalm
By DeWayne Bricker
08/10/06
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The first line of each stanza except for the last two stanzas are the exact words from the 23rd Psalm. The rest are my words.
Even though
It matters not what
Be it cold
Or be it hot

I walk
He痴 there too
Yes with me
And with you

Through the valley
Dark and deep
In his watch
Yes He値l keep

Of the shadow
Unseen fear
In His hand
Holds me near

Of death
It痴 cold breath stings
Yet His words
In my ear doth rings

I will fear
No demon or man
Beast nor plague
For my God can

No evil
Shall hurt me
And all things
Must flee

For You
Lift me up
And You
Fill my cup

Are with me
To carry my heart
Over the hills
You値l never part


Your rod
True and strong
Guides my life
All day long

And your staff
A map for me
Also a light
To help me see

They comfort me
As I fight
And direct my path
Back to the light

Onward to
The mountain top
Without fear
I値l not stop

With you O Lord
I will do right
I値l run the race
I値l fight the fight
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