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TITLE: In this darkness
By Summer Cordon
08/02/06
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For those prodigals who've lost their way. God is compassionate and patient...and waiting.
In this darkness

Trying to feel as I go along
Visionless, moving slowly
Not knowing just where I belong
I make my way through the darkness, poorly

Deep within my nerves are rattled
Uncertainty is my only guide
All the while my hopes unraveled
Fear, unwelcome, by my side

Troubled, I wonder how I arrived
At such a place where no one belongs
Anxiously I try to find
Illumination to help me along

No longer trusting my instincts
I cry out in desperation
Trembling, this humble earthling
Hears a voice that is unmistaken

You should have known all along, my child
This journey isnt for lonely pilgrims
Ive known the way all the while
But, stubbornly, you chose confusion

In the beginning, as a child, you trusted
But, in your desire for independence
You let go of my hand, excited
Wide-eyed, viewing a world without limits

Now you find yourself in this darkness
Lonely and fearing the worst
But, I, in love and patience
Offer you the guidance you knew at first

Will you trust me this time, little one?
My promises have never changed
You will always be my forgiven one
From beginning to end, unstained
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