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TITLE: JOHN
By DeWayne Bricker
07/30/06
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This poem is about The Book of Revelations
It is helpful to read and or know this Bood of Revelations before reading this poem.
JOHN


The Revelation of the Christ
All was shown to me
Blessed are all who read and seek
With open eyes that see

To the churches
Numbered seven
And to all whose names
Reside in heaven

I am the first
And the last
I am the future
And the past

Behold the clouds
All eyes will see
The earth will mourn
From Him they’ll flee

I hold the stars
Within my hand
My feet are set
On see and land

Who is worthy
The seals to break
Lightning and thunder
The earth did quake

Oh, child of man
Do not cry
Wipe the tears
From off your eye

For He is worthy
Yes, there is one
The beloved
The only Son

The root of David
The Lion behold
He hath prevailed
The end is told


A new song
The elders sing
The trumpets blast
The blast did ring

A white horse
A red, a black
Ordained by Him
To attack

To those that endure
A white robe adorned
To them without
The earth did mourn

Heaven and earth
Did roll away
In flames and heat
Then, a new day

A mark from God
Behold the beast
Taken from them
That have the least

Bitter water
Green that burned
Stars from heaven
Bitter water turned

Stinging creatures
Death doth flee
A new Jerusalem
Soon to be

A quarter, a quarter
Then a third
For half an hour
No sound was heard

The dragons’ head
Then the beast
Dead and alive
Look to the East


The prayers of Saints
Names on scrolls
A new Earth and Heaven
The thunder rolls

Goats on His left
Sheep at right
The day has risen
No more night

Behold, behold
All things new
My words are faithful
And are true

A new name
A staff, a rod
Ruler and Savior
And everlasting God
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