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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This was written in frsutration of having shared the gospel with so many people and not seeing much more than apathetic responses. Kinda like, "okay, but youve been warned and if you do go to hell it is not my fault, Ive tried telling you. However, i know that I am never to give up on them or stop praying for them.
You’ll stand before God on Judgment Day
Guilty before Him with nothing to say
He’ll open the books and judgment will come
This is your condemnation, you believe not in the Son
Chance after chance on Earth you did have
To turn from your sin and walk on His path
If only into the Bible you’d look
You’d see Earth is only the front cover
If life were a book
It is only the beginning
A grain of sand on the shore
But the good times you enjoyed
Will then be no more
No joy, no love, no hope, no peace
Hell is full with none of these
Jesus spilt His blood for you
Give in to Him is all you must do
The tapes will be played, Guilty by far
God’s judgment is fair
O Lord, Righteous You are!
So then if repentance is still not yours
By the time that this occurs
And our eyes meet on that fateful day
Remember to you the Gospel I did say
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