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TITLE: In The Worlds Eyes
By Sharon Jones
06/14/06
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I was inspired to write this as I listened to my children and their friends say this over and over. Then it was explained that it is the name of a game play. How about hail Margaret instead!
Hail Mary!
Hail Mary!
Chanting for a game play.
Not thinking of the Name.
A sacred Name indeed!
Hail Mary!
Hail Mary!
Knives cut through my veins
each time it is spoken
in that way.
Satan has a cunning way
of making it seem ok.
Itís just a simple phrase.
A phrase for a game play.
In the worlds eyes
it means nothing.
Itís just the name of a play.
But I know Heavenly Father shudders
every time itís said.
No wonder He refused to give
our Mothers name to know.
We curse His, His Sons
and Maryís without a care.
It doesnít mean anything.
Theyíre just some words prepared.
Prepared by Satan.
An attack on our Lord and King.
Come follow Me.
Who will it be?

By: Sharon Jones
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