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Hello, it's me again
I have some more to say
Seems I have some extra time
Most have forgotten how to Pray
You now have a thing
Known as Gay Church
Come on, you must be joking
They have no idea
The anger this is provoking
They want to get married
They want to adopt
This should never come to be
It goes against morality
It definitely goes against Me
You have a book known as The Bible
Apparently most have never read
It tells on the day of Rapture
Where these people will be led
When this country started
Men had the Fear Of God
Now you can't mention My name
Do you not find this odd
You have so many non believers
Taking me out of the equation
Problem is that My Believers
Have to live in this situation
The people who believe in Me
Are mocked and ridiculed
You were so much better off
Whenever these people ruled
You're selling out to other Countries
That despise Mine and My Sons name
The falling of
" The Most Powerful Country In The World "
Has only it's own people to blame
Fear not My faithful followers
I will receive you just as I said
Before it is all over
The rest could only
Wish that they were dead
I say all this to let you know
Things are going as I had planned
Non Believers won't know what happened
Only My Believers will understand
You're not stated in the Final Battles
You'll see this in The Book Of Revelation
You are one of the first to go
In Mayhem and complete Devastation
So for all My Children
Keep your Faith until My return
The Non Believer will be repaid
Ten Fold on what they've earned
Written By
Robert W. Ford
May 12, 2006
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