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TITLE: To Our Precious Child
By Kimberly Jones
04/28/06
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To Our Precious Child

The day we were blessed to lay eyes on you was the most joyous occasion. We heard your first sound, held your tiny little hand, felt your soft, smooth skin and saw the beautiful blessing that was created.
You warmed our hearts as you started to learn and grow. Watching your personality take shape and show us who were going to grow up to be. Our precious child you changed our lives that day.
Now we are at yet another crossroad in our lives having to say good-bye to our baby boy, to only have the memories and the thoughts of you to keep us warm at night. We know that you had to come and we knew you would have to go, yet at this time we did not know.
Know that we will miss you, the way you use to smile, how you had just the right word to say when the day was dark and grey. The love that you shared that let us all know that you cared lives on in each of our hearts and minds. We know that you are smiling down on us and keeping a watchful eye so as you look and watch know that we LOVE YOU!
Our precious child you changed our lives that day.
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