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TITLE: Feline Elegance
By Helen Murray
04/07/06
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Anyone interested in cats will understand this poem for children
Feline Elegance

Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. miaow.
The master calls.
The master calls.
You wish to come in Sir?
You wish to come in, Your Majesty?
Miaow. Miaow.

Miaow, Miaow,
Miaow, Miaow,
The master calls.
The master calls.
Dinner is served, Sir.
Dinner is served, your majesty.
Miaow. Miaow. Miaow.

Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
The master calls,
The master calls,
You wish to exit Sir?.
You wish to exit, your Majesty?
Miaow. Miaow. Miaow.

Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
The master calls.
The master calls.
You wish to come in Sir?
You wish to come in, Your Majesty?
Miaow. Miaow. Miaow.


Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
The master calls.
The master calls
Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
Miaow. Miaow.
Your masseur is here, Sir.
Your masseur awaits, your Majesty.
Come, sit on my knee Sir,
Take your rest here, your Majesty.
Purr, purr, purr, purr, purr, purrrrrrrrrrrr.
There, how’s that sir?
How do your feel, your Majesty?
Purr, purr, purrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

Tingaling. Tingaling.
Look here, look now,
The cat is rattling the door chain!
Tingaling. Tingaling.
The master calls,
The master calls.
You wish to leave Sir?
You wish to go out, your majesty?
Miaow, Miaow, Miaow.
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