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TITLE: These Past Sixteen Months
By Amanda D'costa
03/31/06
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This is written after pondering upon what my life has been through... witnessing three deaths, three people suffering from chronic ailments and my family seperated far and wide that thinking about hem is itself expensive. And all related to me.
You'd call it hell.
I choose to call it refining.

Loved ones around me die,
One after another,
Two of them very dear to me.
And then the next...
Suffers from a stroke
That affects his life forever.
Paralyzed,
Dreams shattered,
Soul depressed.

The list goes on
One has a tumor,
Another cancer...
Terminally ill is how they define her.
Still further, an accident
That claims a life.
Nightmares, confusion and the like.

We've grown.
Flown out of their nest.
Distance separates us
In four continents.

Yet...

I choose to hold firm
No matter the cost,
To the only comfort
The one on the cross...
Unfathomable love
Ever quenching Spirit
Abiding presence!

I run my race
I stand my ground.
Tho' storm clouds blow o'er me,
I'm safe in His arms.
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