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TITLE: Bluish Gooish Scary Thing
By Gina Martin
03/23/06
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I love to play with nonsense word. Hope you enjoy. I like tough critics - it sharpens my writing skills.

G. Martin
Bluish Gooish Scary Thing
By Gina Martin2006

Nickety pickety snickety mee
I opened my eyes and what did I see

A bluish gooish scary thing
It had one eye and a big red wing

Glooma tooma looma zeek
I looked up at him to get a peek

Doodley hoodley it wasn’t fair
He was so tall I needed a chair

Goony oony joony twee
He bent down to look at me

Abba dabba twittley swing
That one eye was the biggest thing

Pooey mooey looey gee
I wanted this monster to be friends with me

Greevy meevy what did I say?
“Do you see me? Can we go play?”

Nicky picky ticky doo
“Would you go with me to the zoo?”

He didn’t have a mouth so he couldn’t talk
I held his finger as we began to walk

Feemy beemy sweemy tee
Each step he took were ten steps for me

Quigley higley jigley moe
He put me up on his toe

Sweeky leeky tweeky toes
I climbed up to his bluish nose

Pooky tooky nooky twee
That one eye was all that I could see

I talked to him about many things
Burps, bugs, and jingley jings

He sneezed on me foogley zed
A giant glob fell on my head

Mixy pixy hixy yak
It dripped down my tiny back

Ooney gooney sooney nee
He was sad he cried for me

Nicky picky sticky kay
He looked afraid of what I’d say

Looney mooney tooney twee
I told him that I would be

His best friend golly folly gee.
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