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TITLE: The Beauty Of It All
By Ricky Flowers
03/14/06
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By: Rick Flowers

I watched the waves
Crash against the shore
Reminded of Godís power
As never before

The oceanís beauty and color
The wind from off the sea
Blowing the sand
Rustling the trees

I watched the seagull fly
I heard itís beautiful song
The children playing on the beach
In the moment, nothing was wrong

I watched the beautiful sunrise
As the day began anew
In the evening, the awesome sunset
When the day was through

I walked and felt the sand
Underneath my feet
I stepped into the ocean
It was cold but kind of neat

In that very moment
I looked all around
Could anything surpass this beauty?
Then I heard the sound

It was that still small voice
That speaks now and then
This beauty that you see
Is nothing in the end

Nothing in existence
Compares to what will come
For those who believe
For those coming home

Enjoy the beauty around you
The ocean and the land
All I have given
Will never be as grand

As the place I have prepared
For all eternity
A place weíll spend together
All saved souls with Me

These words were of such comfort
Just knowing He is there
I look forward to our meeting
One day in the air.
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