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TITLE: Forgiveness
By Tina Abplanalp
02/25/06
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There's nothing that can really explain having your life washed clean by the blood of the Lord.
Lord, I look to you with tears in my eyes,
While everything in me withers and dies.
With pain, I open my heart and confess
The feelings of remorse that strongly impress
My heart and my soul and threaten to take
My life and my spirit.
I watch as they break.

Iím helpless and alone in my misery, I say.
I donít think I can make it another day.
I know that whatever I promise to do,
The present and future must be left up to you.

Iíve tried and Iíve done all that I can do now,
As I pray that youíll hear me and help me somehow.
Please give me strength to follow the way
Back to you and my faith,
Where I know I must stay.

In repentance, Iíve learned that your presence is near.
I can almost reach out and grasp your hands here.
My heart and my soul, youíve overtaken,
As past sins have finally been long forsaken.

Now I can watch your loving arms open wide
To welcome me enter safely inside
To join the others whoíve sacrificed much
So their lives can be changed
By your miracle touch.

Tina Abplanalp
Copyright 1997
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