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TITLE: Forevermore
By Tina Abplanalp
02/25/06
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I think we're all searching for that special time and place when we can be with the Lord forever. Sometimes it just seems like a distant star.
Is there a place for me,
Safe shelter from the storm,
A place where I can be
All that Iím meant to be,
Where all my dreams come true
And I can share
My life with you,
Forevermore?

Is there time for me
To escape from this pain
A time when I can be
Happy and free,
When sorrow will be gone
And I can feel
Your love lifting me,
Forevermore?

Is there a life for me,
A purpose for my tests,
A life where I can find
Shelter, peace, and rest?
When my weary travels end,
Safe and secure,
Iíll lay down my head
At your feet
Forevermore,
Forevermore.


Tina Abplanalp
Copyright 11 Nov 2005
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