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TITLE: Is it Possible?
By Teri Van Pelt
02/23/06
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I have been attending therapy with a wonderful counselor who takes after the ultimate WONDERFUL COUNSELOR, Jesus. This is dedicated to her. She has really touched me.
Is it possible
that I knew you before?
The time when God only had us in His mind as a mere thought
in His plans?

Is it possible
that your life would be
linked with mine
before time?

For beyond this earthly sphere
My spirit has been linked with yours
bonded by His Spirit of grace and truth.

When I heard your voice for the first time,
My heart leapt with pure joy
Like I had heard that sweet sound somewhere before

I did not know your physical being.
I had not yet seen the sight of you.
When you came into view,
I recognized the very essence of you.

Your sparkle, your shine
the hope that you so freely give.
A reflection of the Christ and the life He lived.

I look in your eyes and they mirror back my own
in ways I have never known.
You show me a side of me
that I have only hoped to be

So, maybe

it is possible!
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