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TITLE: Our Marriage
By Amanda D'costa
02/04/06
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Marriage is something that we of today take lightly, and there is no better way to convey the essence of marriage than by witnessing it in the light of His grace. All glory to your name Jesus....all glory to your name!
Two people in love
Two hearts were wed
A life time together
Fifty years! hearts set.
I saw them in love
I asked them their secret
What she told me then
Im sure neer to forget.

Its Jesus! she exclaimed;
I stood back in awe.
Hes our priority
The first on our charts.
I scarce could believe
That theyd build their life
Their head being Jesus
Not husband or wife.

It took me awhile
To digest this news
It was only later
I understood the truth.
Ive fallen in love
And I am wed,
Seven years by
And our hearts are set.

Its Jesus!, I tell
To all I know,
Who ask for our secret
And want to know more.

Weve learnt a lot by
Investing our love
In so rich a bank
As Jesus above.
When were out of love
And exhausted and cross
He shows us His face
To save us a toss.

He fills us with patience
To know right from wrong
He fills us with trust
Our hearts to sing songs.
He fills us with love
To bear joys and sorrows
All summed up together
Weve a bright new morrow.

So come along folks
And join in with me
To praise God for marriage
In His Trinity!
Were husband and wife
With Jesus our head
And for eternity
Our hearts are wed.
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