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TITLE: I'm there
By Amanda D'costa
02/04/06
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I was inspired by Psalm 23 to write this. This may not be up to the standard, nevertheless I request an honest, frank critique telling me why or how I can edit this. I'd appreciate that.
In the kettle of tenderness the rain sweeps,
Godís Spirit flows and blessings heap,
Oneís heart now knows no sorrow.

In the rainbow of laughter angels dance,
And move about in peaceful trance.
Love never sways nor falters.

In the nursery of silence graces creep
To fill the heart of the one who seeks
For quiet restful waters.

In the arms of love divine and pure
Thereís peace and joy; my lifeís secure.
Iím grazing in green pastures.
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