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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This week's Writing Challenge, entitled "Start," inspired this poem, but I didn't enter it, because I'd like to keep this one, and maybe work on it some more.
Only blamelessness could pick up the pieces so powerfully renewed
Unmuted joy the boat within which tearful loss
Floats with heavenís breath behind her back
Her tears are dropped as well for those whose ugly thoughts protrude
They look to poke the wind out of the widowís sails
They donít blink at the bluntness of Godís will
Holy Spirit instructions, faith, and obedience may seem rude
Within the context of convention and decorum
As if one canít dance and weep at the same time
Jehovah accepted her naked faith and happiness ensued
Friends who have surrendered to love understand
Once you take Godís lead, you donít sit out
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