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TITLE: Painted Gray
By Christy Bauman
12/17/05
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tell me what you think! be honest... :o) i am looking for some constructive critisim and suggestions...
To shatter water.
To walk on the sky.
To capture moonlight.

To ponder the impossible.
To ponder life.
To ponder choice and fate.

To relive a moment.
To recall a memory.
To regret for a lifetime.

Reality mixed with fantasy.
Sorrow mixed with joy.
Pride mixed with shame and regret.

Bittersweet thoughts,
Thoughts of unfulfilled dreams
Dreams that yet shine bright.

Dreary thoughts of the future.
Confused thoughts in the present.
Regretful thoughts for the past.

To ponder the mix
The mix of what is…
Is life and living

Tit for tat
Yin for yang
Everything balances out,
Balances out into a sad canvas painted gray.

Only the Lord,
Of life, love, and liberty
Can chase away this darkness
and bring hope again.
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