TITLE: Dancing Alone
By Christy Bauman
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what do you think about the word choice? what do you believe to be the main message? what do you think about the form?
i am really looking for some honest feedback! :o) thank you for taking the time to critique my poem...
I am dancing through life,
skipping, stepping, twirling, tripping.
I am dancing at the speed of life
quickly, efficiently, energetically, ineptly.
I am dancing alone,
creatively, freely, unrestrictedly, lonely.
I am dancing for the One who is,
Faithful, loving, almighty, just...
Trusting He will continue to guide my steps.
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