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TRUST JESUS TODAY
Another poem to my wife. Sorry I won't add too many more. But I want to hear feed back, as I am poutting together a book of poetry for her for our 8 year anniversary in July.
Be Real My Love Be Real
Be real my Love, Be Real.
Long lasting, unquenchable Love,
Perpetual beauty Be Real.
Never enough time to express my love, Be Real.
Ceaselessly longing to caress my Love, Be Real.
Can the winds of pain stop my love?
Or the words of rage drop my love? No,
My heart pounds for my Love, Be Real.
Itís a wonder how I found my Love,
Which God formed perfectly up above,
And bound my soul into my Love, Be Real.
I Speak the words that bring your name.
Diane- the only one to tame,
This lonely heart, and bring out change,
Causing me to live again, yes you
Have helped God fight all my pains,
Undying Love, Youíre Real.
Long last true Love, Youíre Real!
Endless healing love,
Never-changing in all your ways, and certain Love,
To you am I indebted Love, Youíre Real!
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