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TITLE: Beauty, Pure and Forever
By Samuel Connelly
12/11/05
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Another poem towards my wife.
Beauty, pure and forever untainted;
you have been kissed from heaven,
and sent to me from the Living God.

Your eyes like crystal are a perfect beauty,
with a truth that pierces right through me.
Your body so fragile, softy, and to me, soothing,
Fashioned from an angel’s wing.

You make my heart burn ever so fiercely,
Engulfing and in all my depths consuming,
Expanding the windows of my soul
to pour out my love on you.


Beauty, pure and forever untainted;
you have been kissed from heaven
and sent to me from the Living God.

You once saw my doubts and fears,
But you stayed with me and kissed my tears.
You treasured the unlovable
until I could love again.

How your waves of passion fill me.
When the old man, with sorrows, tried to kill me, you were used to thrust him out and help me to live again.

Then rivers bursting from your soul,
Filled me up and made me whole, how
can I ever thank my God for giving you to me?

Beauty, pure and forever untainted;
you have been kissed from heaven
and sent to me from the Living God.

I will love you now and forever,
so let our hearts continue to be bound together.
There is no one else for me and I am forever
faithful to you…my sweet Love.
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