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TITLE: Just Imagine Heaven
By Ricky Flowers
11/17/05
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By: Rick Flowers

Just imagine heaven
Where there's peace beyond compare
The angels in their snow white gowns
Soaring through the air

Beauty beyond our wildest dreams
No tears and no more strife
A reward the savior offers
After our journey through this life

Even though this gift is free
You must try to live a life that’s pure
That mean’s sometimes it will be hard
There’ll be lots you must endure

But to know the next life never ends
For those who make it there
Wouldn’t you try to live that life
Or would you even care

They say up there, there is no night
The sun will always shine
We’ll walk on streets of solid gold
And with Jesus we shall dine

Think of these things when this life is hard
When you feel so dark and depressed
For when you get to heaven
You’ll be honored, you’ll be blessed

You spend the rest of eternity
With your family and your friends
It makes it seem, not so bad
When this world comes to an end

So take comfort that you know these things
There’s something to look forward too
You’ll live in love with the Father
No work for you to do

It’s a paradise beyond all imagination
Nothing can compare
To the wonders of our heaven
And meeting Jesus in the air.

With that thought I’ll leave you
To ponder what was said
I hope you take it all to heart
The words that you have read.
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