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TRUST JESUS TODAY
Some tough roads trying to conceive and then it just got harder after birth. Although it tested my faith and made it stronger.
My children God gave to me
a woman that was never to conceive
but by God's sweet grace
I became pregnant one day
The feeling of you growing inside
was unrealistic to the world outside
how did you conceive with infertility?
what drugs and doctors did you seek
none, just the great physician above
conceiving was the easy part
carrying you would be hard
for I had scars
Lot's of bedrest will keep him in
so there I lay for 10 weeks in
Then I had you and quickly seen
that conceiving and carrying came easily
it would be the raising that was hard
For my first born son had been scarred
scarred from hereditary genes
my son was very ill it seems
he will never crawl or walk
let alone run
I refused for this to be my sons destiny
and once again went to my physician
and ask Lord what can I do to help?
He said just give him love and lot's of time
after 1 surgery he'll be fine
but the doctor's all said about nine
The first one came at 12 months
I thought we still had eight in line
but then I remembered my physician said he would be fine
He is seven now and is running everywhere
the doctors are beside theirselves
They say a miracle I have found
they can not explain how bones grew after birth.
all they know is it's not from this earth
It was MY PHYSICIAN he done his part
but seen that we found doctors that god had gave a heart.
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