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TITLE: Snake To Woman
By Jan Ackerson
10/19/05
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I was a judge for the "fruit" week, so I couldn't enter. This is the poem that I would have entered, had I been able to do so. I'm not as comfortable with poetry as I am with prose, so any thoughts are appreciated.
Go ahead--it's tasty--
Feel its juices on your chin:
Eat.
This fig--you like it?
Here's another one.
Again.

Don't you love the sweetness?
Sure, it's sticky--we don't care.
More.
Don't think--enjoy it.
If you want to, you can
Share.

Just don't look inside, girl.
Some things you don't need to know.
Hey!
...Yes, that's a wasp there.
Just ignore it. Let it
Go...

Come--eat your fill. There's plenty;
Just as juicy, just as sweet.
Mine.
My dear, you're mine now:
Such a tasty little
Treat.
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