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TITLE: Come To The Father
By Sherry Castelluccio
10/12/05
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I was reflecting on all the natural disasters that have been occuring when I wrote this. I know it's not one of my best so go ahead and be brutal. I can take it, honest!
Come To The Father

The earth quakes and groans and shudders.
I wonder how much more weíll take before we give in and surrender, take responsibility for our mistakes.
I see the news, I watch the signs all pointing to Johnís warning.
Are we nearing the end of time?

Come out of hiding, all you saints, buried under false religion.
Come out and be united with the One True Teacher.
Come out! Come out! The time is now. Please donít tarry any longer.
Let go of those false promises and hold on to the Teacher.

It grieves my heart to see you hanging onto empty dreams.
Donít you know theyíre devilís lies and nothing is as it seems?
Salvation lies here waiting. Go ahead and drink it up. Please donít be left here to taste the fury of Godís cup.

Come out of hiding, all you saints.
Please donít wait until itís too late.
The time is now. Please donít delay.
Come to the Father. Come and be saved.
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