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TITLE: I know your busy
By linda corbett
09/16/05
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I have a series of Dear God poems. I thought I was writing them for my Grandson, but as I matured in spirituality I realized that although they are good for a child, the Holy Spirit intended to start with me
I Know Your Busy




Dear God,

I know you're busy
Got a lot of things to do
But if you've got a minute
I'd like to talk to you
I'd like to crawl up in your lap
And look into your eyes
And tell you that I love you
As much as twice my size
I need to tell you that I'm sorry
For the bad things that I do
And that I'll try much harder
To be much more like you
It feels good just to sit here
All snug in your warm lap
With your arms around me
But now I'm ready for my nap
Thank you God for taking time to comfort me
I WISH THAT I could love you
As much as you love me
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