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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This is from my past. with my poets workshop
you have to work with learning how to work with your poems. this one I thought of. my class gave me 4 to 5 stars on it.
Anything to be said please let me know.
You never said that you are remorseful,
You never came countenance to countenance why you hit me so dreadful.
You never told me why! I had to go.
I said after eighteen years I was regretful about everything before
I marry again.
Do you know that your children motionless love you!
Why did you abuse me?
Are you chatting to anyone about this!
Because I decide to detach myself from you
Everyone giggle at us, some try to even help us.
Your parents gave their all. Your brotherís and sister couldnít believe this was you! Their brother performing this way
Our children will try to forgive you at this time.
Iím so sorry that you have know path, now of where to go.
Itís sad to say, you treat us horrible.
It was all about your associates and your pride kill it.
Iím so sad to see you havenít achieved too much after all these years.
What would you do now?
Did you still want to chat? Theirs nothing to talk about regarding us,
I never saw a guy with know itinerary,
Sad we had to depart from you and move on.
Now weíve vanished on, with our new prospect.
God Bless you with a new life to understand yourself with a problem of being an abuser, you still need to apologies.
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