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TITLE: Without You
By Kurt Youngdale
07/21/05
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Way back when a friend and I used to write songs together. He played the guitar and sang and I just wrote lyrics. I love to sing but not very many other people enjoy the experience. We could always think of album names but we could never decide on a group name. So the following is written as if it were a 45 rpm record with an "A" side and a "B" side. Sorry you can't hear the music. The following group and record label is completely made up. I recorded flesh and bone with my daughter. Since I dont play any instruments it was just our voices
Label : Manderette Donsey Records
Artist: Blind Begger
Side A: Without You (from the LP "Source of Freedom")
Side B: Flesh and Bone (from the LP "Not for the whole world")

Without You
(K Youngdale)

Verse One:
Above me are your ways
I need your wisdom
Evil are the days
I need your strength to carry on
to carry on

Verse Two:
Reaching out my hand
to help another
Following your plan
I try to do the best I can
the best I can

Chorus:
Without you I can do, nothing (repeat 4 times)

Verse Three:
Searching out your word
to start the morning
knowing that I'm heard
praying for another day
another day


Flesh and Bone

I'm made of Flesh
I'm made of Bone
Sometimes I feel
like I'm all alone
I call to you
and wait to feel
something that makes
your love seem real
cause this world is cold
it makes me cry
sometimes I think
that I could die
still I hold fsat
fast to your word
because I believe
the things that I've heard
you are my refuge
the strength in me
you are my help
in time of need
I need your mercy
I need your love
I need your grace
down from above
dont every leave me
this is my prayer
you'll always be there
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