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This is a puppet script I wrote for Bible School back in 1998. The puppets found a time machine and each night is a new adventure in Bible Land.
This is Tuesday night. Sorry lost something in formatting when copied.
1998 FIRST BAPTIST CHURCH VACATION BIBLE SCHOOL
PRESCHOOL PUPPET SCRIPTS - “PUPPETS LOST TIME & SPACE”
TUESDAY - PUPPETS VISIT THE VALLEY OF ELAH
(NARRATOR sets up scene with review of Monday nights events - lights dim - -SOUND of time machine - - Hattie Lou is heard yelling )
(A few moments of silence then Battle SOUNDS start soft – Bud pops out)
B: Man! What a ride!
(HL comes in view slowly - - moaning -
HL: I knew I should have gone to Bible School! Everytime I listen to you I get in trouble!!
B: Awh….Don’t be such a spoil sport HL, this is a REAL adventure!!! LOOK!!!!
(HL turns to look & yells again as battle SOUNDS increase in volume)
HL: It’s soldiers - They have spears !!! OH NO!
(PROPS -spears appear thru curtain - puppets duck out of sight)
(Battle SOUNDS and SPEARS for a few moments then SOUND softens and SPEARS drop out of sight)
(DAVID pops out - HL yells )
HL: OUCH! - Pops up)
HL: Hey watch where you are going you stepped on my head!!
D: Oh I am so sorry, here let me help you.
(BUD pops up)
B: Hey man! That sure is a neat looking hat!! Do you live around here?
D: Yes I do, I am a shepherd boy and I tend sheep for my father Jessee.
HL: Sheep!! I don’t see any sheep!!! Where are we anyway?
D: Why you are in the valley of Elah. Your clothing is strange…where do you come from?
B: We come from First Baptist Church, you know where the Mission Bible Camp is!
HL: Yeah! Where we would be if BEANIE BRAIN here had listened to me!
D: Ummmmmm in Bible Camp? I’ve never heard of them, but the Philistine camp is just over the hill.
B: Is that who was doing all that yelling when we arrived? Man that was neat!!
HL: Somebody needs to tell them to be more careful - Does their parents know they are playing
with sharp things?
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D: They were making a lot of noise and I don’t really think their parents care what they do - They are here to fight against my people the Jews!
B: The Jews!! Man we are in BIBLE TIMES! Hey what is your name and why are you here?
D: My name is David……
HL: (screams) DAVID!! - PHILISTINES!! OH NO! (hides behind Bud) You’re here to kill the
B: COOL!!! Where is he….
(PUPPETS AD-LIB here until you hear Goliath on the tape)
(SOUND tract of Goliath challenging David)
G: COME TO ME AND I WILL GIVE THY FLESH TO THE FOWLS OF THE AIR AND (tape) THE BEASTS OF THE FIELD!!
(DAVID disappears -sound tract continues)
D: YOU COME TO ME WITH A SPEAR & SHIELD!! I COME TO YOU IN THE NAME
(tape) OF THE LORD OF HOSTS!!! THIS DAY WILL THE LORD DELIVER THEE INTO MY HANDS!!
(SOUND track of crowd yelling - battle sounds for a few moments then sound of the stone flying through the air followed by a thud - moment of silence then loud crash)
(all quiet for a moment then cheers for David)( SOUNDS gradually fade)
B: WOW!!! Did you see that!!! Man I gotta have one of those sling shots!!
HL: You are hopeless Bud Kalico!
B: Awh, come on HL - you gotta admit this is SOME adventure!!
HL: Well…. I admit this is a great opportunity to see the Power of the God of Israel - You know David was just a young boy but God used him!
B: Yeah! Maybe God will use us too!
(SOUND time machine is heard as Bud disappears)
HL: Bud! Bud!! Don’t leave me here alone!
(SOUND continues as HL disappears & her voice fades) :
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