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TITLE: NEVER ENDING STREAM OF GOD'S LOVE...
By Andrea Heath
07/13/05
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I know i post this in short story too but i don't know which one to post it so i choosed both poetry and short story...But any ways This is the very first writing that i have ever wrote...This one is extremely special to me because this is the one that i have found out i had a beautful gift of writing that i did not even know that i had...I wrote this on one special night last summer and actually i was up all night long pretty much closed to 24 hrs that day...God was soo present filling me with so much love and he just inspired me to write...And i wrote down those beautiful words of truth and love...That night was a unforgetful night...I can not explain or describe how i felt and how special it was...It helped me grow closer to God and loved Him even more...My parents were so amazed of how creative this writing was because you could feel and see what i was feeling and seeing in this...But anyways i hope you all enjoy it...And also hope it encourage you and bring you closer to God as well...ENJOY!! Be free! Be blessed! Be loved!
Andrea~
NEVER ENDING STREAM OF GOD’S LOVE…

I lay down on the tall grass far away from the dark surroundings…
I closed my eyes picturing myself laying in a beautiful field filled with beautiful heavenly creatures that are all around me with no fear just beauty…
I ask show me yourself O Beautiful Holy One that helped me to picture this field of beauty…
Then I opened my eyes from this beautiful image that I had but my heart still repeating the same question over and over again…
While I’m looking up at the dark cloudy sky I asked again O Beautiful Holy One let me see your beautiful face with a smile looking down on me, let me hear your songs that you sing to me, and let me feel your fire of encouraging love going through me like a running stream of water that never ends…
When I’m still looking at the dark cloudy sky it started to open and showing me the beautiful rays of light’s from the sun next to the beauty of the blue clear ocean sky that is hiding behind the dark clouds… After all this had happen a beautiful mysterious face appeared on the blue clear ocean sky and this beautiful mysterious face was smiling down at me… It was the Beautiful Holy One and his words were, Here I am my child I’m here so you can see my beautiful face with a smile looking down at you, and I sing you my songs for you to hear them, I’m here to let you feel my fire of encouraging love going through you like a running stream of water that never ends…
And I’m always here with you right by your side I’ll never leave it… I love you my child always…Have faith on your journey and be strong, believe in yourself and in me I will protect you, I will guide you, I will bless you with all the things you need and want…If you need me just ask me and I’ll be there to help you… And his last words were Good bye my child, I love you…
Before I could say good bye and I love him too he was gone right before my eyes…But a strong wind of air blew through me and I felt his present still near me I felt so strong, so powerful, and so unstoppable…And I will never forget this powerful awesome moment…He will always be in my thoughts, in my mind, and in my heart I will make sure he’s alive and high inside everyone in this world…
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