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TITLE: Coming Down (7 March 2014)
By Graham Insley
03/06/14
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Hi guys, go for it with as much red in as you like; knowing that every valid point helps me to grow.

Thanks.
Close your eyes for just a second,
Letís imagine the scene,
Itís like you see in the movies,
The end time films youíve seen.
With earthquakes and rolling thunder,
Explosions everywhere,
But this is not entertainment,
Itís for real, you are there!
The earth is really moving,
Feel the heat, the flames,
Every single road is closed down,
Screaming, panic and pain.
Have you got the vivid picture,
Is it real to the eye?
Itís whatís called the end of the age,
And friend, that time draws nigh.

You've got to catch a train or boat,
Got to get out of town,
But the airport has now been closed,
Judgement is coming down.
His patience has been exhausted,
Itís the end of the game,
And all that matters to Him now,
Is does He know your name?
Has it been written by His blood,
Down in the Book of Life,
Will you enter His Holy Land?
Or face hell and its strife?
Do you know the name of Jesus,
Has He paid your full price?
Will you pass through those pearly gates,
Saved by the grace of Christ?

There is now only one train left,
Your last and final chance.
Seats are very easy to get,
Or do the fire dance.
This is a ride you cannot buy,
But there's a price to pay.
Good deeds and your religious works,
Wonít save you on that day.
Itís a case of His Holy Grace,
Provision of His Word,
And a simple truth simply asked,
Have you obeyed what you heard?.
You need to get real and sincere,
Ask yourself this question,
Is your name in that Holy Book,
Do you get a mention?

Have you accepted Christ as Saviour?
Have you heard and also obeyed His Word?
Quickly get your ticket out of town,
The Judgement of God is coming down.
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