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TITLE: No one home for Christmas 12/26/13
By Wesley Hesketh
12/26/13
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The emptiness of being alone. The overwhelming saddens tears you apart. Until you find no one home for Christmas
No one home for Christmas
I cannot hear a word.
Songs and hymns are silent
Quietness is heard.

I want to talk to someone.
But no one can be found.
Iím flooded by my loneliness
In Despair I have drown.

Nothing on the Christmas tree
Not a bulb or flashing light.
I find no joy in what I do
On this or any night.

My hands reach out to emptiness.
My voice cries out in pain.
A home that can no longer breathe
Is one thatís gone insane.

An empty lifeís in my hands
with echoes of nobody there.
Cannot find a smiling face
It is like nobody cares.

No one home for Christmas
My friends canít see my life.
Them not being here with me
Feels like a stabbing knife.

I will give me presents
All marked from myself.
With tears running from my eyes
Iíll crawl back on the shelf.
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