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TITLE: my part 10/5
By Wesley Hesketh
09/05/13
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sometimes we just sit and expect things to happen. we want God to wait on us. but there is more to all this than that. this was written for the writing contest using "extra" as the prompt.
Iím stagnant in a pool of dreams
my pain is very clear.
So slowly I just pass away
my time is drawing near.

As I look back over my life
and what it might have been.
I am so disappointed
because of the mess itís in.

What a mess Iíve made of me.
and all the things Iíve done.
Right now the game of life
isnít a happy one.

I have a God in heaven
but He doesnít seem to hear.
I give Him His 10 minute
Sunday as 7 nears.

I just canít understand
why my lifeís like this.
I think the devil has stolen my joy
itís the thing I miss.

So I sat upon the curb
wondering what to do.
So I decided to try again
and have a talk with you.

I donít know how to make this right
I stumble and fall down.
All my will to fight is gone
as I lie here on the ground.

A gust of wind, a newspaper
came swirling down the street.
I looked at what was written
on the paper at my feed.

In big letters it read EXTRA
I did not read the rest
I felt God said something
and has put me to a test.

Then the spirit instructed me
to stand up and look around.
Canít I find the meaning
of that word blown cross the ground?

Suddenly this all became clear.
I have not done my part.
God is there to help me
putting extra in my heart.


He showed me that my part
was all important too.
For without itís space in time
I could not make it through.

The talks I have with God
help to show the way.
They have taught me how to act
and what words to say.

With this, things are brighter
I find that once again.
I can hear my Fatherís voice
my extra special friend.
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