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TITLE: "You Can't Unscramble an Egg"
By Venice Kichura
07/09/05
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I only repeated
What someone else told me.
It was just a little
What seemed so true story.

I only wanted to
Pass the news along
So others could pray
How could it be that wrong?


But before I knew it
Sister Ruth was in tears
At the corner store
The tale she overhears.

Too late I discover
That the gossip I heard
Was not the true story
How did it get so blurred?

Now all is in chaos
Over one small untruth.
Can I take back my words
To redeem Sister Ruth?

You canít put back feathers
In a pillow once torn
You canít take back gossip
Once the story is born.

You cannot stop a plague
Or unscramble an egg.
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