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TITLE: Occultism, February 17, 2013
By Jill Usher
02/17/13
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Fascination held me fast
Astonished at what had past
The humdrum beat was not all there was
A world beyond yet within my grasp

Entering in
I was adept at the craft
It was plainly true
I could tell
the future and its travails

Deeper and deeper I journeyed in
Awareness of a greater mind
this was divine and sublime
no sense of shame crossed my mind

But out of nowhere
The darkness came
Leering demons
At Me!
like a shot

The battlefield arose, surrounding me
COLOSSAL
AND
GARGANTUAN
the power marshaled against me
Delphi at my side
whispering promises

But the Ancient One
He walked the sky
Peace eternal, peace profound
peace so gentle
I was found
Take me back there

My shame laid bare
My choice was clear
THE greater mind
saved me
from the lie
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